This is my second screenplay. The first one was not organized enough and I was blasted on Triggerstreet.com by one reader. It made me take my screenplay down. I have a new script that is Drama, Martial Arts and Family oriented. I used Powerstructure software and Moviemagic. I am not sure if my format is correct as well as how my content sounds. Would someone be willing to read the synopsis and a few pages of the full script to give me feedback? I would gladly appreciate it.
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