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Is this an Urban Tale -- When Pulp Fiction and Taxi Driver made the rounds, the READERS hated it... is this true?

Could a Reader tell us why Readers in general don't like scripts like these.

Last question for the READER -- would any script from Spike Lee recieve rave CONSIDERATION...? eg. "DO THE RIGHT THING', it's a great script in my opinion!! But I have feeling READER might hate it.

Hoping to get some answers.

Hi, anyone heard anything from Lighthouse screenwriting contest 2007?

Did you get your feedback yet?

When is the results coming out?

Just worried they lost my script or forgot about me.

Thank you.

Thanks Terry. I'll use this for my Christmas friends get together when we play movie trivia.

The Great Santini, the movie, is a difficult watch. Some fathers are like that!

I think a remake is overdue.

I wish the did a version -- father and daughter/mother conflicts.

Thanks Jean,

Come to think of it I have applied to so many contests and when I do the math -- its expensive but worth it in the long run.

I hope Lighthouse Screenwriting Contest or someone out their with some connection or authority could help us out?

$50 dollar can be substantial to some and we all have to be honest and what goes around comes around.

Hoping that we all get the results and feedback.

Thank you.

Hey Randy,

I will see it soon.

Could you comment on the "set and custumes".

In the trailer, this threw me off. For some reason it did not look real.

Was this the case?

I thought the fashion in the movie was too "in your face and not right".

And in screenwriting for westerns, is the "fashion" a big part of the writing process?

Regards.

Hey Randy,

I will see it soon.

Could you comment on the "set and custumes".

In the trailer, this threw me off. For some reason it did not look real.

Was this the case?

I thought the fashion in the movie was too "in your face and not right".

And in screenwriting for westerns, is the "fashion" a big part of the writing process?

Regards.

Hey Randy,

When reading a Western style screenplay -- for eg. introducing the main characters for the first time and also introducing the wardrobe partially or a "very small" portion of it -- is this a good idea....

I think wardrobe and style is different for evey comboy/farmer/cowgirl/killer/postmaster....and a unique wardrobe gives one a unique character.

I don't write westerns but I do read them and my fav. is still "the proposition" and "the long riders".

Any input would be great.

Regards,

Hey Randy,

Most likely Brad Pitt's new Jesse James epic will come out before Christmas. Rumors has it its will take out Yuma.

I will see both. But key players are betttttting for an Oscar for the long title epic -- Jesse James.

Can't wait to see Brad vs. Crowe at the Oscars. It will be a blast.

And lastly, I read Dances with Wolves, it was very descriptive, go figure?

Regards

Hi John Areends,

When attending a film festivals I tend to take off when the "party" or "socializing" start. The max I stay is 1/2 hour. It feels the producers and directors and seasoned TV writers(so many of them trying to cross over into features) are way smoother than me.

Any tips on "surviving" these "cocktails" get-together?

I don't like to drink, what is the best way to start a coversation at these "festival parties or get togethers"?

I'm currently looking for some coaching and books on this topic. I heard that it takes "guts" to go these parties if you're not a social butterfly.

I prefer the pitch festivals over these parties.

Thanks, any tips would help.

Hi Guy W,

I did not get my feedback yet from Lighthouse.

I emailed them so many times and they are not replying?

Do you have an email or contact name at Lighthouse?

Or could you ask them to contact me. I would greatlly appreciate it.

I worked hard to save up and to apply to their contest and feedback.

Why are they not giving me back my feedback.

Thank you.

Thanks Elaine.

I wish LIGHTHOUSE CONTEST would email all of us telling us about this "big" delay.

What happened to CUSTOMER SERVICE!

Anyway, thanks again Elaine for going the distance and helping us with this matter. Appreciated.

Just curious to know if others got their feedback.

Guy W, preceeding writer, got a feedback. But my friends and I never got our feedback.

So stressful.

Thanks

Hello Guy W.

I send two emails so far. No reply from Lighthouse.

Could you contact them and ask them about my feedback.

I don't know what to do? So frustrating.

Regards Ben

Just would like to do a survey --

Which is easier to do -- writing a good novel or a good writing a good screenplay?

Please provide a quick answer.

Thanks.

Hey John,

Just frustrated and I'm thinking of quitting this business and going into film directing.

Every year the number of contests are increasing. Every year the number of script consultants are increasing. Every year the number of screenplay books are increasing.

So what should I do?

Who is doing who and what is happening?

Please advise.

Hello D. Jay W

LOL, let's try again --

Would be a good idea to write the novel first and then covert the novel into a spec script? I think this is the question I'm looking for.

People are telling me its hard work but a good idea.

Any thoughts.

Just saw the new Sean Penn Movie Into the Wild.

First thing, what a script -- rule breaking and full of sublime "gimmicks".

But it works. The audience clapped at the end.

Just to prove it takes a great director to lead a novel into a great script.

I believe this movie will be nominated for some awards.

Best Regards

Great. I'll check out the webpage and keep an eye for it.

UK has some great festivals, check it out -- they're trying to push their festival industry? Affordable to apply.

BL

Hello folks,

RE: Lighthouse Screenplay Contest 2007

I send the admin. dept at Lighthouse Screenplay Contest 3 emails in the past 2 months.

No reply!!

Please, can LIGHTHOUSE staff advise when the feedbacks will be emailed out and if this contest is alive or dead.

Their "under construction" webpage looks like they will soon close their doors.

Anyone heard from them????

BL

Hi Yara,

I'm meeting more writers everyday who are converting their novels into screenplays and some the other way around. In fact some are converting their novels and or screenplays into GRAPHIC NOVELS. Way to go!!!

I know one producer who buys the rights to tons of novels and then hire writers (with a decent pay!)to convert them into screenplays.

Writing can be fun and rewarding.

Thanks Yara.

I recently had the chance to pitch my script at a Pitch Festival and the producer asked me this question -- "do you write your script hoping the producer will make it and take it to the Cannes Film Festival and win BEST PICTURE??"...

I thought that was a "crazy" question.

What are some of the best and worst questions you ever got from producers/agents/managers etc. at PITCH FESTIVALS?

Just curious.

Regards BL

Hi Mara,

Thanks for the opportunity. Just curious to know what kind of feeback I should expect?

What are some of the famous directors/producers/actors -- represented by your organization?

Are you looking for scripts that have scored well in coverages and other contests?

Thanks BL

Hi, my writing partner is pushing me to try this DVD/Seminar called "The Mini-Movie Method" for screenwriters.

Great, now I have to spend more money.

Is the The Mini-Movie Method is wise choice. Does it work.

Thanks BL

Read the link.

All I have to say..."watch out Hollywood, here comes Linda.."

Looks like a movie that will open lots of doors -- past, present, and future.

Wonderful.

Hi Mike Moore...

Thanks for being assertive.

I like your point, well taken.

My friend just made to 3 Quarter Finalists this year, and I never saw him this happy. Including Writers Network -- Fade In Magazine.

He said for me to apply, at least then I can stay in game for a while until I win or get close and give up?

What does making QUARTER FINALIST really mean?

Is WRITERS NETWORK Quarter finanlist a great thing, should I take my friend for lunch and celebrate? I think so, he came close out of 2000+ applicants.

BL

Ben Afflec new movie comes out this Friday. GETTING rave reviews.

It went from a Novel to a screenplay.

But going from a screenplay to a novel, can be challenging. But its possible, it's slowly getting popular.

But it's best if we go from a novel to a screenplay. Saves time and energy.

Just a trend I'm observing.

BL

Hey Folks

I'm just about to rush to the bookstore and buy this ne book. A sequel to Save the Cat!

Anyone read this new book, how is it?

Thanks. BL

Hey Douglas,

I agree with you.

You ever heard of this screenplay contest called LIGHTHOUSE SCREENPLAY CONTEST -- I send them three of my screenplay and so far not reply or confirmation. Is this a legit contest. They have a web page.

I keep emailing them, they don't reply. Do you think they will refund my money.

Thanks BL

Thanks Douglas.

Yes, it was fair, pro. and honest and Scriptsavvy respected all genre -- from low independent script to high-concept script.

As artist we must learn to respect all styles and genres.

And as a contest, Script Savvy does a great job of respecting this by giving everyone a chance.

This is one contest to look for and will become big in the future.

Well done. Honesty and creative vision.

Respected, BL

Hi Colin,

Your logline has a bubbling effect. Meaning, it sounds like this script has to be made into a movie.

"Relationships, deer, lost!!!"......this logline is brimming with "someone has got to make this movie". Pure entertainment, bravo!!!

Keep up the marketing.

BL

Hi Sheila,

What kind of consulting do you provide? I think I bought an e-book from you, long time ago. I'll look for it.

Since you are deep into the business, just curious to know if you have a book on the art of pitching at pitch festivals?

Regards BL

Regards

Hello Andres Diaz,

Once you have a good draft with decent coverages. Send it out to everyone and post it everywhere. Create a "fan' base.

Hope this helps.

Walter,

I see your point of view. Well-taken.

Hello all,

I'm from Ontario, Canada. I plan to move to LA, one day -- hopefully.

I hear that California has a fire "brewing" and it might last into Friday.

To screenwriters/artists/consultants and all Californians out there, who might need help -- moving, re-locating, and travelling and lodging or anxiety?

We would be more than happy to help out. Let us know.

Regards BL

Hi Paula,

I'm sure it possible to help. I hear Buffalo and New York is helping out.

If more help is needed I can contact the representatives and request for lodging.

I'm sure we won't hesistate to provide full shelter.

If someone lost their home and no place to go, we will definitely try to help.

Regards BL

Here is the first hint...

Name the movie?

"The reasons cited is that shooting back-to-back could help costs considerably, plus would avoid any potential upcoming strike. The series is one of the most profitable franchises on the markets with last year's third entry for example costing a mere $10 million, but taking in $164 million in ticket sales worldwide"

Be a sport, guess the name of the movie??



BL

Hey folks,

Saw J.J. Abrams' Cloverfield this Saturday.

An experience I will never forget.

The rate the movie -- 9/10 - sublime action.

Screenplay -- 8/10 -- risky and a dose of unforgettable romance.

Anyone want to comment?

Is this the future of cinema and screenwriting?

Regards, Ben

Hey Folks,

Just wanted to add this also -- this is truly a great script and movie.

Cloverfield will go down in history as an iconic movie -- "facebook" fused with "youtube" and some overdosing of Starbucks coffee(if you know what I mean (lol) :)

Really, don't miss this movie. What a blast.

Can't wait to see it again.

Regards

I

Hey Jean,

Fantastic and good luck with your thriller.

I think it's possible to sell a thriller noir.

The Academy Awards (most of the times) is riddled with dark scripts. The best place is to market/visit/ network with the major film festivals around the world.

Some directors are really keen on thrillers.

Best of luck.

Regards Ben

Hey Todd,

Some good points here.

Question -- what is your opinion of finalists((winners) (eg. those who take home $15,000.00 dollars or more )) and have agents/managers calling often.

Of course I'm refering to the 4 big screenwriting contests in North America.

And I recently read the "pro" script for the new Ben Affleck movie -- not impressed.

Regards Ben

Hello folks!!!

I know the bookstores are packed with books on unauthorized biographies. But what are the legal ramifications for unauthorized screenplays? I think a screenplay on A Winehouse, L Lohan, B Spears would be a intriguing.

Any advice.

Regards.

Thanks Ron and Harvey for the info and links.

Really helped.

Regards Ben

Hi John,

I see your point.

The contest business is so frustrating.

Just curious to know what would be Gordy's opinion of these movies --

You never know, maybe he's a member in this Forum --

1. Scarface (Depalma) 2. Magnolia 3. Disturbia 4. Sin City 5. Mad Max 6. Superbad 7. There Will Be Blood 8. Barton Fink 9. Six Sense 10. The Departed

John, I hope he replies so we can get an idea of his vision and movies he would like to direct in the future.

Regards

Readers are saying "NO" but I say YES and the producers are saying MAYBE.

I strongly believe that on an ACT 1 level, Amy Winehouse is a sympathetic character!

And wondering what are some of the best scripts/movies on drug addiction?

A character arc does not exist in 2008, its slowly becoming an urban myth....

We have accept this fact - will Amy, Britney, Ledger etc. -- dominate the neo-scripts of the future?

We want to learn more about these hurting souls....

BL

A while back a successful reader turned producer mentioned that AGENTS AND MANAGERS are notorious for throwing out up-opened query letters!!!!! Is this true? I heard that most popular AGENTS get over 1000 query letters per month!

Can an "INSIDER" or "INTERN" or "RECEPTIONIST" or "READER" or maybe even an actual "AGENT" or "MANAGER" comment on this. Maybe this is an urban myth? Just want to know the truth so we can re-focus on our marketing plan...

Cheers BL

Today I saw the first trailer for --Indiana_Jones_and_the_Kingdom_of_the_Crystal_Skull.

Jaw-dropping, I tell you.

I would like to hear your comment on the trailer, specifically the dialouges and actions?

This is what CINEMA and SCREENWRITING is all about. I jumped up with so much joy that I almost got fired at work. But luckily my Boss liked it too.

The trailer was so inspiring -- I will never give up on this spec. sale business. This trailer is better than any MOTIVATIONAL books.

Thank you Hollywood.

I will work night and day to perfect my TARZAN script.

Cheers! BL

Thank you all for the info. This advice is truly helpful and full of wisdom.

Thanks again for shinning some light.

Regards BL

Hi Everyone,

Thanks all for the help and advice and wisdom.

After I read some of these negative/painful notes about my posting, I became drepressed but I recovered.

One thing I learned ON MOVIEBYTES BB is that developing "tought skin" is essential and part of making it in Hollywood but sometimes negative comments can really be painful and we should all "do the right thing"... It's a very very long marathon, this business.

As the music band REM said -- everyone hurts, sometimes...

Thanks again for the fantastic advice!!!

In the future I plan to re-structure my questions before posting.

Cheers, BL

Hey Ron,

Very timely and helpful.

Last week, I contacted an entertainment lawyer just to add the details to my business plan. I mentioned the proposal to him and he said his rate is $450.00 per hour and he cannot give me an estimate due to the complex nature of the topic.

On that note, I'm thinking of turning the character into a new "jungle hero" type and make it into a subplot and 100% unique.

Lastly, I learned a lot reading your posting on MB BB. Thanks.

Regards, BL

Thanks Steve.

Thanks for sharing your wisdom and experiences.

Everyear Hollywood is flooded with around 60,000 aspiring screenwriters --it's a rough business -- we all have to maximize our potential and never give up.

I look forward to your future posts.

Do you have any e-articles etc? Would like to read them.

Regards BL

Hey Folks,

One word -- JUNO.

This Sunday will make history.

Best Picture -- JUNO

Best Script -- JUNO

What's your prediction?, will JUNO take the INDEPENDENT FILM BUSINESS higher?

Best Regards, BL

Hi Steve,

Thanks for posting this.

Good question.

Maybe Gordy could come on this Bulletin and tells us -- how come adventure/action/gritty screenplays are not given a fair shake? Maybe they are? I don't know.

But I'm not getting a clear answer from Blue Cat.

Why not give action scripts a fair deal?

Blue Cat should have a category for action screenplays!! and hire readers with experiences reading scripts with heavy action...

If a script like "CRANK" or "SNATCH" or "DIE HARD" came to Gordy's desk -- what would readers say??

I think this is a fair question.

Regards BL

Hey Thomas,

Action screenplays rule!

Jason Statham's new movie comes out this friday.

Getting rave reviews.

As for CRANK, the script is written with "out of this world attitude". Check it out. As for the movie -- 6.5/10, with a lousy ending.

Regards BL

Slowly but surely, I'm seeing more contests and readers appreciating action/thriller scripts.

When I write, I'm trying to reduce the budget all the time(some contest and readers shy away from "high-concept/special effects" action scripts)! But others have no problem with it.

A contest provider told me they're looking for the next action/thriller on the level of Resevoir Dogs and Fargo.

Bottom line -- put some action and some thrills and a dark exciting storyline, we stand a chance.

Any good books on action screenwriting out there?

Best Regards,

BL

Thanks Terri,

You advice is immensely helpful and forces me to re-evaluate things.

Thanks,

BL

Hey Thomas,

It took me 4 years to realize this.

But sometimes screenwriting books work indirectly.

Read it for the fun of it and maybe something good will come out of it.

You're right -- we are a servant to our imagination -- no books out there could assist to that.

Thanks,

BL

Hey Folks,

Just heard -- efforts are underway to re-publish this book.

Looking forward to it.

Regards,

BL

Thank you Moviebytes.com!

Your recent newsletter had an immense effect on my business/marketing plan.

Your info on www.plasticpoetry.com and the article on scripts being written for internet broadcast and sales , really had an impact.

Again, thank you.

Regards,

BL

The Boss' VP son at my work(Auto Parts business) ask me to post this question to writers in Hollywood -- will a degree in screenwriting from a University guarantee an okay paying studio job?

Regards

BL

Hey Thomas,

I heard a while back that Blake Edwards wanted to do the remake of "laurel and hardy".

I also heard a while back Mel Gibson wanted to do a remake "the three stooges".

And just recently I heard the Coen Brothers are interested in doing a remake of the ""marx brothers..."".

Screenwriters and directors must go back to the past and re-discover/re-create the magic and learn from the MASTERS. Yes.

Regards,

BL

Thanks all for the timely input.

Really impressed with such understanding and helpful posts.

Regards.

BL

Hello Folks,

Just wondering?

Why did the action/thriller movie "Hitman" fail at the box-office.

Was it the screenwriter's fault or the director's fault?

So far, everyone who saw this movie -- HATED IT WITH A PASSION.

Why?????

Regards



BL

Hello Folks,

Just curious -- are animation screenplays popular? Are they being optioned?

OR do we have to write the "book/novel/story" first and then try to convert it into a screenplay after we develop a fan base?

Are producers searching for the next big animation screenplay via CONTESTS?

Since spec screenplays are moving into non-descrip. territory, then how is it possible to sell an animation script?

Maybe I got it all wrong -- animation screenplays should be overly descriptive and full of passionate style of writing, where the words fly into your face?

Helppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp.

Thanks,

BL

Thanks -- Thomas, Larry -- your wisdom and experience much appreciated.

I'm working 6 days a week. Not working fast, but giving it my best.



Thank again.

Regards BL

When selecting a screenplay competition to enter, what are the most important features that you look for?

Answer --

Who are the judges? Who are the readers? Who's involve in Admin? Are Admin reading the scripts? What proof will you provide to me that the screenplay was read?



When reviewing screenplay competitions, what causes you to eliminate a competition from consideration?

Answer --

Do they respect other genre? A good contest will respect all kinds of scripts -- thriller, horror, drama, comedy, historical, animation, family, urban, high-concept, western, experimental, romance etc.

Hope this helps.

Regards BL

Hey Thomas,

Great reply. Concise and entertaining.



Regards,

BL

Hey Folks,

Here is some inspiring MOVIE release for this summer --

Have a great Summer 2008, folks!!!!

Win some contests, write the next blockbuster or Academy Award, finish that draft, most of all -- have some fun, and let's all chillllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll out....

1. "THE LOVE GURU" --- will open to 50 MILLION IN FIRST WEEK BOXOFFICE

2. SPEEED RACER -- will open to 80 MILLION IN FIRST WEEK BOX OFFICE

3. WANTED -- will open to 40 MILLION IN FIRST WEEK BOXOFFICE

Any one want to make a prediction?

Best Regards,

BL

I bought the book a while back.

I started reading it. Good start, promising.

Will finish up this summer.

Since you are the expert!

Could you provide me with some of the best examples of complicated dramatic irony is recent/old classic movies?

Most of the dramatic irony I'm seeing/reading are too simple and not worth it, like as if a high school drama teacher wrote it.

Regards

BL

Attn: Mr. Rob Tobin

I plan to finish reading your book this summer. So far it's expertly written and close to being a concise brilliant piece of work.

Since you are the expert!

Could you provide us with some of the best examples of complicated dramatic irony is recent/old classic movies?

Most of the dramatic irony I'm seeing/reading are too simple and not worth it, like as if a high school drama teacher wrote it.

Regards

BL

Hey Thomas,

Okay, you're not seeing the power of SPEED RACER, THE LOVE GURU, WANTED...

I have this crazy gut instinct that these three movies will RE-WRITE BOX OFFICE HISTORY.

Summer of 2008 will be the year of PROSPERITY for all of us, we all have to work hard and think POSITIVE or think like a cool politician.

What are the contests you're entering?

I met two guys who won the 10,000 prize recently!!!!

Regards,



BL

Hey d. santiago ,

I'm predicting Ind. Jones, to open to 30 million max.

Regards,

BL

Hey Thomas,

Check out Fade-In Magazine Contests - they have 2 diff. one per year. I believe they get over 2000 entrants per contest.

And I'm still having bad feelings about Indiana J.

Look at A. Jackson's King Kong remake-- it fizzled at the box office. The pundits were predicting big numbers but...

Regards,

BL

Thanks Terry,

This a great.

Thank you.

You examples are outstanding, better than the ones I read recently.

Thanks again,

BL

Gene,

This is one of the best post on MOVIEBYTES.

And the best helpful posting award goes to .....Gene....

Cheers!!!

And -- all the Screenplay Contest Providers on this planet should read this post.

We will and must get the best customer service.

Thank you,

Regards,

BL

Hello Gene and Supporters!!!

I think all screenplay contests should create a " detailed logline" or a "very very very short story summary" of the scripts they receive. It does not have to be a masterpiece -- but a good effort is all we ask....

This will give us proof that the script was actually read.

Some screenwriting contests are already doing this.

Regards,



BL

Hey Thomas, Patrick...

If you had to predict 30 years into the future -- what kind of screenwriting books would line the shelves ...



Regards,

BL

Help...I think hard copies is way to go, but I could be wrong!

Attention Readers/Producers/Script Contest Administrators!!!!!!

What do you prefer -- a hard copy or digital copy of the script?

Then how would you explain this -- all of the hottest/famous directors and producers in Hollywood love hard copies? They detest digital copies with a passion.

Please advise.

Are we being fooled.

I think a digital copy of a script get rejected 90% of the time.

Regards,

BL

I agree.

Yes it's a money game.

We all have to be careful how we budget/spend our hard earn cash.

Good points overall Thomas!! -- keep writing, read the classics, go to the library, watch the classics............

People don't really care -- they just want easy money.......

If Rob really cares, he would provide some free advice first and then within time --- writers will buy his book...

I have a business -- that's how it works -- you have to give and ask nothing in return -- and then within time you will make a sale....

Regards, Ben

Congrat !!! Evan Wright Menzel

This is fantastic news and this award will open doors for you and your bright future in writing and directing --

Just curious if you could share some of your writing/directing wisdom with us?

What advice would give to aspiring and upcoming screenwriters?

What are some of the other contests you applied to?

Saw "SHARP" -- very visual, was financing difficult? Should all screenwriter attempt to direct a short film?

As a director, what impresses you when you read a script?

What are some of your favourite movies?

Who are your favourite screenwriters in Hollywood?

Once again, Congrat!!!

Regards, BL

Hey, d. santiago --

What was Steven's latest hit?

Why was this trailer "booooooed" at a recent showing after TROPIC THUNDER and THE LOVE GURU attained laugher paralysis.

The college/university crowd will not want to see INDY. Boring! That theme song depresses me.

Come on folks, Steve and George already made their money in the 80s. Forget about it.

This movie will go nowhere.

Regards,

BL

Hey Thomas,

That INDY(starring H. Ford) film, really depresses me.

I would sell my house any day to see TROPIC THUNDER or even Batman, The Dark Knight.

I feel like yelling. Why are we so caught up with this Indiana Jones, I don't get it!!!

Regards,

BL

Hey Thomas,

When B.E's "The Party", came out, it was a huge hit. Still now -- it's a cult move. The movie was "mild".

Love Guru is also mild humor. But brilliantly mild with very little hot pepper.

It's a great family, date movie.

It's going to be huge.

Regards

BL

Can someone please try to answer this question....

This is really frustrating.

Or maybe it's a gamble -- digital or hard-copy?

Regards,

BL

Thanks Thomas and Orlando.

But I heard Nicholl script contest only wants hard copy? Is this true? Why?

This is driving my crazy.

Regards BL

Hi folks,

An upcoming screenwriter asked me read the script Sunset Boulevard and to learn from it.

I read it this afternoon and I got a splitting headache.

It's masterfully written, that is if I had a time machine.

But why are modern screenwriters raving about this script by Wilder?

Yes it's good but we are living into 2010...why should I enjoy this script....I did not?

Can someone tell me if I should read it over? Maybe I should read it with a good cup of coffee at Starbucks...

I'll try to read it over in September.



Regards

BL

Thank Greg,

You feedback on this topic really changed my plans.

I'm slowly learning that since we are moving into 2010, digital copies will be the norm.

Thanks

BL

Hey Alex,

Thanks for that post.

Thank you. Your comment really had an impact on my plans.

Okay contests, here I come....

Regards

BL

Need help here.

Producers want a script that's a PAGE-TURNER...

Yes, if you are writing suspense ONLY...

Maybe I'm wrong.

All the scripts I'm reading are well-written and entertaining in parts, but they are not PAGE-TURNERS...

Can someone actually tell me if they actually read a script in one sitting...and say "now that's what you call a PAGE TURNER...

Please list them, I would like to read them and learn from them...

Regards,

BL

Kyle,

So true.

Regards,

BL

Thanks Jean, Eric, Paula.

Starting more re-writes this Fall.

Thanks for this stimulus.

Regards,

BL

Hi Folks,

Just heard, the marketing for SPEED RACER is in full force around the world. Everyone will be taking their friends/families/bosses etc. to see this movie. I bet on this. 100%.

I don't know about you but I can't back down with this prediction...

This movie will be the next big thing since THE MATRIX.

Can' wait to read the screenplay. Are there any samples/parts/first couple of pages on internet right now? For geg. The "W BROTHERS" are famous for describing a "deadly" complicated action scene in 4 sentence or less? Now that's the ticket!!!!!

I know CS magazine likes to print samples? Maybe next issue. Can't wait.

I wish H Ford and Steven S the best.....but this SPEED RACER will change and affect Hollywood!

Regards,

BL

Here's a list of screenwriters/directors who took their scripts and made them into a movie by listening to no one and taking 100% risk AND telling everyone to **** ***.

Let's all learn from them -- and whether you want to listen to script consultants or not, that's up to you ...In my opinion -- good script consultants are needed only if you plan NOT to direct.

HISTORY will always remember these screenwriters --

1. DAVID LYNCH 2. FRANCIS FORD COPPOLA 3. DAVID CRONENBERG 4. ATOM EGOYAN 5. JAMES CAMERON 6. TARANTINO 7. WOODY ALLEN

So if you want to direct your script, listen to no one, JUST DO IT NOW and write that shooting script!!

Peace,

BL

Hey Juliet,

Script Pimp is one of the best out there.

Fade-In Magazine is one I always look forward to -- they have two contest going.

Regards,

BL

Hey Eric,

I see your point of view. I do use screenplay consultants and Barb is the best of the best.

Right now, I'm just taking some risk with one of my script. I want to promote it and make it like a "stubbbbbbborn" artist without any consulting.

You know - life is short -- I have to do this.

Regards,

BL

Hi,

Just heard the amazing news from www.filmaka.com

I lost but some moviebytes members won --

Congrats to -- W L CHANG C COSTELO A SALEEM T MILES

I know their presentation of their pitch package was "state of the art" and very comprehensive. It was one of the toughest contest out there with a very tight deadline.

Thanks for being a leader in this busines. We look up to you guys.

Regards,

BL

Hey Connie,

Why are there so many screenwriting contests every year? This is a serious and sad disease.

It's an epidemic!!!!

Hello Folks,

Eight months ago I had a list of eleven screenwriting contests I was going to apply.

I learned my lesson. I CANNOT BE FOOLED AND WILL NOT BE FOOLED. Now I will only apply to four of them.

Don't get me wrong -- I have 4 quarter-finalist and I winning under my belt, but the future is even more unpredictable...

The extra money I saved I bought Dara Mark's book -- Inside Story -- a brilliant book -- soon to reconstruct the foundation of dramatic screenwriting and help us all. She has an excellent section on the magic of RD's Leathal Weapon".

Regards, BL

Just wondering if someone could answer this question -- WHY DO SCREENWRITING CONTEST EXTEND THEIR DEADLINES, I NEVER HEARD OF THIS? WHY DO THEY DO IT?



Regards

BL

Hi Collin,

Yes, this is a great accomplishment, you deserve it for being a leader and hard worker. Once again, congrats to Collin and all the winners.

I think filmaka.com is close to the Golden Globe Awards in terms of script pitching/Contests/digital filmmaking...

My pitch package I send to filmaka.com was short, maybe in the future I'll enter something longer with more details.

At the moment I'm developing some comprehensive pitch packages for future contests and pitching.

Colin, is this a good idea? Any pitching advice?

This filmaka.com webpage contests is an incredible place to get exposure. I'm so impressed with their Board members/directors and judges.

This is a contest that really care and respect the applicants.

I hope in the future all Screenwriting Contests would learn from them.

In the future I think all screenwriting contests should have a BOARD OF DIRECTORS AND a list of accomplished judges and a fair voting system, like filmaka.com

This is how a respected PUBLIC COMPANY works and that is why FILMAKA.COM is the best and will positively rock the foundation and treat all the screenwriters and digital filmmakers in this world with respect.

YES, I'M ASKING ALL THE ASPIRING AND UPCOMING SCREENWRITERS OF THE WORLD TO CONVERT PART OR ALL OF THEIR SCRIPT INTO A DIGITAL SHORT OR FEATURE. SAVE UP YOUR MONEY, CREATE A BUDGET -- IT'S POSSIBLE. IT'S NOT EXPENSIVE!!! REMEMBER, SOME OF THIS BEST SCREENWRITERS ARE DIRECTORS AND VICE VERSA. SO IT IS POSSIBLE. LET'S TAKE OURSELVES OUT OF OUR COMFORT ZONE AND DO IT.

We deserve it. We all work hard in this world.

I can't wait to find out about their upcoming pitching and digital filmaking contests.

Good luck to all.

Very Best Regards,



BL

Cloverfield the DVD movie comes out this week.

But how about the Screenplay -- will it be available? Is the screenplay still top secret?

Where can I buy/download it etc.???

Thanks folks.

BL

Hello Folks,

I predicted the movie "Forgetting Sarah Marshall" would make close to 40 million this weekend at the box-office.

But sadly it came in second with 18 million$$$$$$$. Jackie Chan and Jet Li kicked it into second place. I don't get this?

I'm so sad and depressed. But I'll recover.

What went wrong?

This should be a huge box-office draw when we look at the screenwriters and director involved with this summer treat -- Forgetting Sarah Marshall.

What went wrong?

Kind Regards,

BL

Thanks Santiago and Paula.

There are some screenwriting contests that never extend their deadlines.

This is a very complicated/tricky and mysterious business and we all have to be careful and ask lots of questions.

Thanks for your honest advice.

Regards,

BL

Hello Folks,

I practically "injured" myself on a "health level" and "marriage level" to meet these deadlines.

It's not fair!!!!!

Major film production companies, stick with deadlines. We should learn from them. This is how the film industry works. We have to get used to it.

One of the best screenwriting contest in this world will never change their deadline. I know this for a fact. They have a proven track record. Bravo for them.

We all have to work with tight deadlines.

Deadlines should never be extended.

Once again, it's not fair for those writers who work night and day to meet these deadlines.

I really don't get it!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This is painful and unfair.

Regards,

BL

Thanks Jean for the timely input. I agree.



Regards,

BL

Hey Thomas,

I don't want to name names.

I'm currently running in full force and I have some placings in other quarter-finalist lists. It will be a great summer, I'm not giving up. I will work/edit day and night until I win.

It's just that some screenwriting contest business are so "mysterious".

Extending a deadline makes me sick.

It bumps off and eliminates the writers who already placed(quarter-finalist etc.) before the extended deadline. So unfair. How many more deadline extensions will a contest have, that's the next problem.

Ya Ya, life is unfair, I know.

Peace,

BL

Hey Mark,

Thanks for the clarification.

Regards, BL

Hey Jean, I must admit -- you got a point there.

Well taken.

Let's see what happens -- THE CONTEST PROVIDERS are listening and reading all that moves in this forum...

Regards, BL

Hey Folks.

I saw he movie.

zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ...

Will Forgetting Sarah Marshall be an iconic comedy. I say HELL NO.

Will TROPIC THUNDER be an iconic comedy. I say HELL YES.

Forgetting Sarah Marshall did not strike gold and the reason is simple -- too ""pedestrial"". (spl?)

An iconic comedy should stay on top for a least three weeks in a row. Look at Beetlejuice -- boxoffice king for 4 weeks straight.

Regards,

BL

Hey folks,

Just heard about http://www.creativeartistsawards.com advertised by MOVIEBYTES.COM

Thanks for this folk.

Hungry and happy to apply to this one.

Looks very promising.

Any thoughts?

Regards, BL

A reader(now retired)from 80's who worked for over 10 years in a top film studio -- made this statement to me via an email -- ""we have to change drastically with hollywood trends in order to survive...""

On that note -- sorry folks, but this Batman The Dark Knight will gross over 120 million in 3 days....

And it will remain #1 for 4 weeks straight....

Any thoughts?

Peace,

BL

Hey Thomas,

What he meant is this -- if we look at trends in the 70s, 80s, 90s ... -- Hollywood might be changing for the worst. BUT, he also said that history repeats itself and Hollywood in the future will make movies similar to LAST TANGO IN PARIS, BARBERELLA(spl?), TITANIC, BLADE RUNNER, GHANDHI, THE EXORCIST, PORKYS, MY PRIVATE TUTOR, RISKY BUSINESS, PRETTY IN PINK, EDWARD SCISSORS HAND, CHARIOTS OF FIRE's soundtrack....

Good news afterall and I look forward to this future...

Yes, LOVE GURU will surprise all the pundits this summer $$$$$$$$$

Peace,

BL

Good point Paula.



Regards,

BL

Hi Julie and Jim and PJ,

I(we) look forward to applying to your contest.

With this much effort and hard work - Script Dept. and Silver Screenwriting Competition will reach the sky and back.

Thanks for introducing a contest that is truly truly honest and helpful.

Jim, just wanted to know what are some of you all time favourite screenplays (produced and those optioned or upcoming)? And if you had to make a list of 5 top Hollywood screenwriters, what would that list look like?

Again, www.thescriptdepartment.com is making waves. Congrats.

Cheers!!!!

BL

Thanks Heather.

I'll apply to your contest in the first week of May.

Thanks for the posting a reply.

This means a lot to us all.

Regards,

BL

Hey Lou,

What are some of your favourite R-rated comedies?

And what are some of your NC-17 favourite comedies? Maybe there's none. But it's coming -- BORAT part deux anyone?

Could you give use a teasing synopsis of your R-rated comedy you mentioned above?

I think TROPIC THUNDER is R-rated -- looking forward to it this summer.



Peace,

BL

A start to a great summer.

Would any of the quarterfinalist from STORYPROS list like to post their loglines in this forum?

Some of the titles of script from John Dart's STORYPROS contest sound tantalizing and interesting.

Good job for picking good titles for your scripts.

Once again -- congrats to all for getting back in this "game" and the Hollywood "chase".

And special thanks to John Dart for working this hard to provide us with a respectful and professional contest.

Summer has truly "begun"....Hooooray.....

Peace,



BL

Hi Alex,

I went to your webpage but did not see the BIO of the person who will be providing the notes/feedback for $100.00

Could you let us know a bit about his/her BIO. Is it contracted out?

And do you have a sample of the type of feedback we might be getting.

Regards

BL

Hi Folks,

Please don't hate me for this.

I just heard this on the radio -- some Hollywood Reporter just mentioned that a video game by name of -- GRAND THEFT AUTO -- will take a bite out the box-office this weekend. A video game!!!!!!

And worst of all, the top studio and its TOP DOGS are worried that this video game will have an effect on IRON-MAN. Are you kidding me.

Tell me this is only a temporary urban myth.

I knew I was too old for this.

Oh well, it's never too late to take Freedman's course/seminar on writing scripts for VIDEO GAMES. I can't believe I said that.

Peace.

BL

Hey Thomas....

Just heard -- IRON MAN made 40 million on Friday in North America.

Time to JUMP JUMP up. Jump up.

And also heard that the maker of GTA are always looking for writers and programmers. But they expect you to work 12 hours a day and to get used to Divorces. This is a fact. How sad.

They have tons of cash.

I'll send GTA my resume. Very part-time that is.

Sounds fun and sad.



Cheers. BL

Time to celebrate folks --

IRON MAN made over 100 million dollars.

SPEED RACER will do 80 million dollars

BATMAN will do 120 million.

INDIANA JONES will do a cool 40 million dollars.

LOVE GURU will do a brisk 35 million.

ANDAM SANDLER's new movie -- You Don't Mess with the Zohan will be a surprise -- will take in 30 million dollars.

Please post your projections AND remember it all starts with screenwriter.



Peace,

BL

Hi Bob,

I agree.

This movie is the common denominator of an average film.

With a better director -- it would fly into immortality ....but as it stands "forget about it"

It tasted sour and sweet for two a long hours and I will not buy or order it again.

Sorrrrrrrrrry IRON MAN, not buying your DVD.

Peace,

BL

Hey Diane,

How was your experience with them. Any pros and Cons? What are some the best affordable ones out there?



BL

THE HULK -- WHAT AN AMAZING TRAILER.

"THE HULK" -- I can't wait to read the screenplay, then read the novel, and then... watch the movie in IMAX. YES!

WOW -- what a trailer -- pure adrenalin, pure over the top pseudo-sublime action --BRILLIANT!

Do you think it's going to break IRON- MAN box office (3days) record of 100 million dollars?

Peace

BL

YES!

Bob, the trailer was truly an experience I will never forget soon.

MARVEL will give these STUDIOS a good run at the box office.

THE HULK looks so uniquely entertaining that I would pay twice to see it at IMAX.

Actually it's a perfect trailer. Masterfully edited.

I loved the scene where he kicks...okay I'm not going to give it away, see if for yourself.

Lastly, on a screenwriting level, reading and watching stories like THE HULK, can be better than most traditional mythic structures...

Regards,

BL

Thanks Alex for these thoughtful and helpful answers.

With this much leadership , I'll be applying.

AFF sounds like a good contest.

Made my day.

Regards,

BL

Hey Bob,

The pundits are raving about SPEED RACER. The W Brothers is about to unleash a masterpiece.

The insiders saw INDY 4 -- from reading the article at CNN.COM -- "been there done that" feel.

Regards,

BL

Hi Connie,

I can't believe this is happening.

You should get to the bottom of this.

Email Jim C directly.

And file a formal objection/complaint.

Good luck with this.

Regards

BL

Hi Folks,

Any "intern" from the big film STUDIOS in this forum?

If yes, please help us with some answers to these questions --

1. In general what is the job of an INTERN?

2. Can an INTERN break or make a deal?

3. Are interns aspiring screenwriters?

4. Is it very business-like for interns to take promising screenwriters for business lunches and talk about the scripts?

5. Do interns push there own genre most of the time?

6. Can an intern be fired? Is this common? Is being an intern stressful?

7.Do intern accept gifts?

9. What happens after working over 1 year as an intern?

10. Do all great movie executives start off as interns?

Thank you.

BL

Hi Heather,

The section on your webpage titled Video Highlights and New Writers in the News are not working.

Could you let us know when it will be up and running.

This is an exciting feature and you are one of very few contests that's providing this. Thanks for being a leader in this business.

Regards,

BL

Hi Folks,

I just heard about group of writers who never entered any screenwriting contest in their life-time.

But they all have some success -- agents, managers, optioned and their scripts made into movies. And I read some samples of their work -- stunningly good.

And these writers have full-time non-writing related jobs.

They write in the evening and weekends.

But they never entered SCREENWRITING CONTESTS.

What's their secret?

Here it is -- "your critics are your friends".

Peace, BL

Hey Jean, how cool of you.

I dedicate my post to all the mothers of the world and one movie that hits a home run on this day -- Almodóvar's -- All About My Mother (Todo sobre mi madre)--- forever brilliant!





Peace,

BL

Hey Ron,

How I hated the overproduced final confrontation in Spiderman 2 and 3 and X-Men 2.

Good thing the director of IRONMAN showed some restraint. That is -- some.

Still it's not a masterpiece like Batman 1.

Do you agree?

Peace,

BL

Hey Ron,

You write with "zest".

Thoughful point of view about this topic.

Do you write for magazines/blogs/comics/articles etc.?

Question -- is there a slight chance that IRONMAN will drop to #2 at the box-office when INDY4 comes out?



Regards,

BL

Good stuff Heather.

As a new contest, you're already among the top contest fav. in North America.

Mel Gibson -- ICON, etc., on board! Can't wait to submit.

Mad Max forever!

Thanks again for having this PRO contest.

Regards,

BL

Thomas, Nathan,

Yes, Speed Racer is a marketing disaster. The web is ripping this movie --big business mistakes, one after another. Well that's what happens when you take too much risk.

I am saddened by this. But I will recover.

A. Jolie's new movie -- looks way too busy, more Matrix effects?

Regards,

BL

Could someone in Independent Film Industry answer these questions --

It took me 2 years to convert/re-write 3 of my scripts into an Independent-style budget script. Don't get me wrong, I original love was INDEPENDENT FILMS!

I was all excited and now I hear these depressing news --

Please give me some positive answers to these questions--

#1 Why would someone let Cablevision, owner of the IFC channel have complete control over Independent films?

#2 Why did Indie Warner Independent close down their offices?

#3 Why is the Indie distribution company ThinkFilm not making money?

#4 Why did New Line Cinema close its Indie offices permanently?

#5 Why did Discovery Network close their independent film department?

#6 Why did Indie Picturehouse close its offices?

This business is so frustrating? What is happening? Is this just temporary?

Regards,

BL

Hi Patrick,

Re: Mid-Story-Sag

I recently took the movie LA CONFIDENTIAL and tried to detail out every minute of the film in reference to key theories of screenwriting. It became impossible. It cannot be done. Forget what the books are preaching.

The mid story of any script will never sag if the "lead creative" would only trust their natural story-telling instinct.

Great movies with zero "mid-story sag" were edited heavily by the director before and after the script was written.

Sometimes it takes a non-writer to make sure the movie is never boring.



Peace,

BL

Hey-- Michele, Paula, John --

So many screenwriters, contest providers, agents, renegade independent film-makers invested so much time chasing these satelite corporate INDIE film companies(which I listed above).

Independent screenwriters and directors made friends with these "BIG FISH" which lead to a solid network.

Now these companies are just castles in the sky or maybe castles on the beach?

But I will regroup and come back stronger.

Thanks for the advice.



Peace, BL

Hey Heather

Timely and hopeful advice.

Practicing my pitch as we speak.

Thanks,

BL

RE: THUNDERCATS

This is good news.

I can't wait to see the cast.

Or the casting call or try-outs.

Beyonce anyone?

Regards,

BL

Hey folks,

A friend with over 20 screenplay contests (placings), wants to pack it up and move back to Montreal, Canada. He had an agent and a manager. He's giving up on Hollywood, Los Angeles.

He writes historical/thriller style of screenplays.

I told him that he is a talented writer and in order to sell this kind of script, he has to hire a top notch film marketing company to maximize his chance in Hollywood.

Is this good advice?

Maybe you can help. What is the best way for him to market his history/thriller/period screenplays?

Thanks, BL

Hi all,

Thank for the input.

I'm going to tell him to take a long vacation. Come back and give it another shot. But this time believe in luck, hard work and have more fun.

That's the best I can do.



Regards, BL

Indiana Jones and the Kingdom of the Crystal Skull (2008) - who saw it?

Any moviebytes fans from France?

Reviews are coming in, the first one came in from UK.

The internet has the latest on the first showing and opinions from some of the best film critics around the world.

You judge for yourself.

I'm speechless right now.

Peace,

BL

Hi Folks,

Is this a good book to buy on this topic -- Kris Malkiewicz's Cinematography? I heard this is the best book on cinematography.

I'm constantly being asked to make a professional short film of my feature script.

So I decided to give it a shot and take this year to learn all I can and film in 2009.

Studying cinematography first.

Regards,

BL

Hey Thomas,

Complicated but invigorating post.

Will give it a shot later.

I'll watch the movies over and post soon.

I was planning to analyze these two movies inside out anyway.

Thanks for posting and providing the stimulus.

Regards, BL

Hello Alex...

Okay, I will send it at the end of the month.

Are you expecting tons of scripts to come in near the final deadline? Is this the norm?

What's the pros and cons of submitting on the 31th of May or June 01 2008, when compared to entering during March/April 2008?

Have all the scripts been read or judged already?

Or do you accumulate them and distribute to the readers in July 2008.

Regards, BL

Hi Folks...

What is the average age of a professional reader or becoming one?

I read coverage from those who are 60 years old and those who are 18 years old and those in between.

All I have to say is that it takes "a lot" of wisdom to write a pro coverage/feedback -- the good, the bad and ugly must shine on a professional level so you don't tick off the producers or owners or contest providers and get fired.

Does age matter?

I could be wrong.

Peace BL

Hey folks,

I strongly recommend that you fight bad coverage and development notes.

It keeps you alive as a writer.

Get a team together and attack those coverage providers who think they are the God's gift to film-making by getting personal and sexist.

Peace.

BL

Hello,

If a coverage provider lectures you on how to be politically correct, is that fair game? Is he out of line?

My question, why did the coverage provider get upset with the lesbian lifestyle in my script?

He said, this is wrong!

But I disagree, that coverage provider should be respectful and open.

One world, one love.

Peace forever.

BL

Hi,

I took a look.

Informative.

Keep em coming.

How's the reading going so far?

Anything like THE SIX SENSE or THE MATRIX coming your way?

You never know!

Regards, BL

Hey Folks,

INDIANA JONES part 4 did not make lots of money!!!!!!

The studio heads are not impressed with the numbers. Yes it's big, but not as big as forecasted.

www.Metacritic.com -- disclosed that the paying public give it a 5 out of ten?

And a survey from CNN Ent. dept. had bad things to say about this movie. You should hear the nasty comments.

Just check out the internet and find out what public thinks of this movie. I am really sad.

I wanted this movie to be as good as the first one. I wanted a masterpiece.

I am so sad.

What went wrong? In this case the critics don't count.

Peace.

BL

Hey Nathan,

Yes I agree -- too many coincidences in IRON MAN.

Now let's see if BATMAN-DARK KNIGHT will make history at the box office. It looks pretty violent. But in a poetic way.

I saw the third official trailer. Stunning peice of film-making.

Regards, BL

Hi Shell,

Your advice is good medicine.

Overall I'm getting mixed reviews for my script.

Some hate it.

Some gave it mixed reviews.

I would say I got two "A", tons of "C" and three "F minus"

All the coverage providers gave me different opinions. For example some readers said the script was too simple, others said it was too complicated and still others said it was too "dum" and I should bury it and still others said I'm trying to be too smart and STILL others are saying that I'm trying to imitate Borat and Tarantino and Guy Ritchie and that I am "obnoxious" and as a writer I'm laughable (why would they say something like this!!!!, so unprofessional)

But then you have other readers who said that my script was entertaining, full of energy and cinematic and would make a great movie. Actually the best compliment I received was someone told me my script falls in the "Blue Velvet" category.

Yes I have won -- one award(winner), 1 semi-finalist, 5 quarter-finalist.

Lastly -- two coverage said that I had my own style.

I will never give up!

Bottom line -- some enjoy gritty scripts others don't.

Yup, it is very painful when I get insulted on a personal level. But I learn to absorb it. What goes around comes around.

Peace BL

Hi Shell,

You are the Doctor!

Thanks for this input.

Will post soon.

Regards BL

Hi Steve and all...

Steve made a great comment --

"Don't get mad...get educated and hone your craft and make the readers mad that they say..."Shit, I wish I could write like this." They'll still probably toss it in the garbage can but we mad them mad... "

After thinking about how a reader works, JEALOUSLY does exist in this business. It's a FORCE, ITS A MOVEMENT.

Maybe a professional reader can come to this forum and tell us how they handle JEALOUSLY. I don't think anyone can really control this distructive behavior, unless you're GHANDHI OR MOTHER TERESA OR IRON-MAN(Mr. Robert Downey, he never gets jealous -- why can't readers be more like him, confident and cool)

For example, if a reader wants to write a script like "GOODFELLAS" but can't, then if he/she sees a script on that level...would they throw it in the garbage? The answer is a big YES.

Steve, how do I protect myself from JEALOUSLY?

This business is heart-breaking.

Peace,

BL

Hi Walter,

The way the coverage is composed, tells you if the reader is jealous, pissed off, happy or a nasty etc.

In the past I have filed complaint to the owners of companies about specific coverages. Just a few.

The owners/managers agreed with me and said the coverages were unfair and I got a second coverage with an apology.

Answer this question why would a reader insult me and then at the end tell me that I'm a talented writer.

That's because the reader is human and sometimes they made mistakes and they get jealous and angry.

Kingsley Amis said that "if you can't annoy somebody with a what you write, I think there's little point in writing"

Scriptwriting is a professional business and should not be like the fashion business, it cannot operate on unfair emotions. As screenwriters we have to control our negative emotional behavior.

Peace, BL

Hey folks,

So found, from what I read, AFF sounds good.

Actually a million times better than others.

Regards, BL

Hey folks,

Can't we all get along.

BL

Hey Fans and Enemies....

As a screenwriter, I don't know what I did wrong.

This business of having fans and enemies is addictive. Just like in Hollywood. I am Hollywood. I will always chase Hollywood.

But I think I'm getting too many negative reviews and I should challenge myself more so I could be more entertaining to the world. I understand -- you want me to leave. Okay I'm leaving. What's the rush. Okay, I'm leaving.

I'm moving to writing more at my laptop. I got to focus and finish a few more scripts or type faster (lol).

As a professor(lol) once said and actually emailed me -- we all have too much time on our hands and we should just turn off the computer and use less of the internet. It's not productive, really too many people, including myself overuse posting on the internet. We should return to world of Mayberry. Don Knots really was a cool dude. Oh how I miss him.

Again, its kind of addictive building fans and enemies. Such is Hollywood.

Bye folks and I will never post here again. I promise.

Good afternoon and may all your dreams come true.

Keep writing!

Peace.

Ben Lanyc Los Angeles, New York ?

You guys are right.

I will turn over a new leaf.

I will not waste anyones time.

I will read the forum from now on and if you want me to post, I will.

Feel free to ask me for my opinion if you wish. I will try me best to give you a clear and respectful answer.

I really did not mean to hurt anyone.

I think there is a mis-communication here. I will speak with clarity and not "jump on the couch" a lot, like TC, if you know what I mean. But some questions I cannot answer, please respect that.

I'm not a trouble-maker. Sometimes I get caught up in the characters I create.

I' m really sorry.

At times working long hours and sleeping very little can make me hyper, idiotic and foolish and sometimes, again, creative.

But this is who I am.

Peace.

BL

Thanks Don.

Some of the best readers I met are acutally editors by trade. But it's rare.

Just my thought.

Peace,

BL BL

Hello Folks,

Saw the list of winners from AAA latest contest.

Some "popular" scripts in there.

Not bad if I might add.

Would love to hear about the Garbo script.

Maybe the writer could post some info.

Tantalizing, indeed.



Regards, BL

Thanks Gene Langlais and all...

It's rough out there. Thank you for your advice.

I have to be myself, I agree.

I don't have to explain anything but one day I will provide some explanations and answers...

I treat the world with respect.

Flops, financial losses, insults, jokes, laughter, F minus coverages, misery and low box-office results -- can make men and women around the world cry like a sick Panda.

I don't take vacations because I like BEING THERE -- to sell my script and write like the PETER DAVID of screenwriting? and then to try to connect with the world with my cinematic vision...

One last question -- you ever read a so-so coverage that was eventually made into a movie? Is this the majority? I could be wrong.



Peace, BL

Lanyc's final letter --

Michelle, I am really sorry if I have insulted you.

I'm really sorry.

I don't know if you would accept my apology.

To all, sorry if I came across as insulting!

I might be repeating myself but I have to say this.

I will return soon. New and improved and no substitutes.

Going to work, Starbucks and beach. Not in that order.

À bientôt.

BL

Hi Folks,

Just got back.

I almost fell off my boat when I heard this.

India's Reliance will invest $500 million dollars in a new venture with Dreamworks.

I don't mean to be insulting when I say that in the future India and China might become majority owners of everything that move in Hollywood. I think they might be here already.

I don't care what happens as long as they make A grade movies. I like new ventures.

On a math and finacial/accounting level, this takeover is possible and scary. Twenty years from now -- the name Hollywood might evolve to Reliance Entertainment.

Any thoughts? I'm happy for all the shareholders.

Peace, BL

Hello Folks,

This is one book you should read before the end of Summer -- RIMA GREER'S -- THE REAL LOW DOWN, DIRTY TRUTH ABOUT HOLLYWOOD AGENTING.

This book is 200% revealing and 100% addictive. You will read it over and over.

I knew this unique culture existed in Hollywood. Now it's documented in a truthful book.

Read it now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

It's so invigorating that I felt like dancing in the rain.

How has this book changed your life as a writer?

Let's chat.

Peace. BL

Hey Folks,

I heard that Hollywood is full MBAs.

Maybe they can turn things around.

Scary thought.

Peace, BL

Hey Bobbette,

I heard they like well balanced screenplays.

Not too sweet, Not too sour, and not too hot.

Just a perfect recipe for all to enjoy.

For example, a well-balanced movie would be "The Conversation", "The French Connection" and "Wall-Street" etc.

Hope this helps.

By Aug. 01/2008, I will apply to this contest.

I did some research on the internet on this company and their vision.

Peace

BL

Hey folks,

I just saw the movie WANTED, directed by an action and style genius -- Timur Bekmambetov, starring -- Angelina Jolie and the birth of a new action hero...

The movie had an unforgettable ending.

Best ending since THE MATRIX.

A few guys in the theatre applauded when the ending dialouge was delivered...

And in fact I overheard a guy tell his friend over the cellular phone in the hallway..."dude you got to see this movie, it's wicked..."

Don't miss it, just a bit too violent, but that's another thread.

Now the question I ask you -- in your ACT 3 do you have an unpredictable ending dialouge?

Do you have something as cool as the ending in "THE MATRIX" or "EMPIRE STRIKES BACK" or "SILENCE OF THE LAMBS" or "WALL STREET".

I will work hard on all my scripts to create an ending dialouge that will send a "happy shockwave smile" into the theatre.

This is what I learned after watching 'WANTED'

Peace.

BL

Hey John, you ever thought of converting one of your screenplays into a graphic novel? You provide the punchy dialogues and settings and then team up with a pencil and ink artist.

Is this possible in general? -- going from screenplay to graphic novel.

Do you know anyone that has done that?

What your opinion of the graphic novel 'History of Violence'.

Peace,

BL

Hi folks,

Someone told me to try them for coverage --

http://screenplayreaders.com/

Anyone used them? Any good?



Peace

BL

Hi Jean,

She's not doing the contest. Why? But I did love her past contests, you know with that great check-off list and brief notes etc.

How sad, tell me it's not true.

I think all of us at Moviebytes should stand up and " Barb, you should have your contests forever....."

Peace,

BL

Hey folks.

This is a great post.

I'm guessing that Blue Cat has a group of Readers that stucked it out with Gordy for over 5 years.

And they know what Gordy likes and what they like and it's a big happy marriage.

So my question for Gordy -- who are your Readers? Please publish their BIO only.

Home come PAGE tells us the BIO! That's because they have readers who speciliaze in all genre.

I wish Gordy would open up the gate a bit more.

So Gordy when will you have a category for musicals or urban crime sagas or animation or graphic novels or sweeping romance like "Moulin Rouge" etc.

Gordy, I did attend your New York workshop and you are a great mentor and coach, but can you please give the other guys a chance....

Peace BL

Hi Lou,

I saw your name a couple of places. Congrats.

Just curious, what kind of scripts do you write?

What's your style?

No strees, just doing some networking and you sound like you would write an out of this world script...

Do you write comedies?

Peace, BL

Hi folks,

Just found out "Mamma Mia! (2008)', the movie, is being released this month at a local cinema near you and it's getting excellent reviews.

I just wish there was an easier way to to market "screenplay -- musicals". Contests and producers should be more open-minded to musicals. Some of the greatest movies in Hollywood are musicals. Admit it folks, we all love a good musical movie.

But once in a while I do see a musical screenplay placing in the top screenplay contests.

There's hope after all.

Any thoughts?

Peace, BL

Hi Janet,

Here it is the release dates for Mamma Mia...

I wish Hollywood would try to make at least 3 musicals per year.

Anyway, I'm not giving up. I think directors like Spike Lee, Steve S. , Depalma and Tim B. etc, would make great musicals.

Would you say Edward Scissors Hand was a semi-musical?

Here's the release dates for Mamma Mia:

UK 30 June 2008 (London) (premiere) Netherlands 2 July 2008 (Amsterdam) (premiere) Greece 3 July 2008 Belgium 4 July 2008 (Wilkinson American Movie Day) Sweden 4 July 2008 (Stockholm) (premiere) Australia 9 July 2008 (Melbourne) (premiere) Iceland 9 July 2008 Australia 10 July 2008 Norway 10 July 2008 Denmark 11 July 2008 Sweden 11 July 2008 UK 11 July 2008 USA 16 July 2008 (New York City, New York) (premiere) Germany 17 July 2008 Hungary 17 July 2008 Netherlands 17 July 2008 Austria 18 July 2008 Estonia 18 July 2008 Finland 18 July 2008 USA 18 July 2008 Egypt 23 July 2008 Spain 13 August 2008 Czech Republic 14 August 2008 Brazil 15 August 2008 Argentina 21 August 2008 Israel 21 August 2008 Mexico 29 August 2008 Portugal 4 September 2008 Slovakia 4 September 2008 Romania 5 September 2008 Belgium 10 September 2008 France 10 September 2008 Hong Kong 11 September 2008 Singapore 18 September 2008 Russia 25 September 2008 Venezuela 26 September 2008 Italy 3 October 2008 Turkey 3 October 2008

Hi Janet,

You have lots of experience and wisdom in this area. Good luck with the script. A while ago I talked to company in Nashville that accepted musicals -- screenplays. I can't remember their name. See if you can Google them.

Lastly, do you know where I can get copies of the following screenplays "Saturday Night Fever", "Footloose" "Grease", "Flashdance"

Peace, BL

Hi Folks,

What kind of scripts usually win at Gaffers?

What are the judges looking for?

Just curious.

Peace,

BL

Hey Folks,

Next week Batman is ready to go down in history as a masterpiece and now I hear this good news about the future of Hollywood....

Downey Jr. set for 'Sherlock Holmes' and Guy Ritchie will direct for Warner Bros.

How delicious!!!!!! Can't wait to watch this movie.

Would you watch this movie? Will it be a big box-office hit? Will it be R-rated? Will there be some drug-use in it?

I'm so happy that I feel like jumping on a couch. Finally Downey Jr. and Madonna's husband Mr. Richie will clean up at the Academy Awards.

I bet you a million dollar that Madonna is jealous. And this will be the movie that will lead to a separation or divorce.

Peace,

BL

Hey Folks,

Just saw the list of the winners at Script Pimp 2008.

Mine, mine, they are all screenwriters with a professional BIO list as long as my laptop.

Google tells me that most of these winners are already well-established screenwriters and I'm happy they have a load of advice and wisdom to share on the internet. One of the winner is renowed teacher in the art of screenwriting. Good work Script Pimp --a screenwriting Teacher won? , finally? Huh?

Script Pimp, you really know how to pick them. Thanks for picking leaders and movers and shakers -- so we could learn from these already successful writers and --- one day, we hope our little but surely big names will come up on your list and then our names will be shine in IMDB, GOOGLES etc.

Cheers my friend.

Here is a toast to Script Pimp.

The best contest on and off this planet. I mean to say the best contest in the Universe.

Any thoughts?

Wish you were here.

BL

Hi folks,

I am about to expose a procedure that some screenplay contests use -- (I am not saying which one, but I'm sure it exist) --

1. First enter all entrants name in a database

2. Use a "free-ware" software to run that database into Google. Then the software will spit out a percentage list/grid. For example Jones XY, screenwriter, 80%; Linda MYZ, screenwriter, 76%....

3. Select 20 of them and then read their script(the first page!). Most likely they rest would be decent.

4. Last and most important step - I take my money ($40 or $50 or $35) out of my pocket throw it down the toilet and flush, once, you know water preservation.

5. OR just hire a admin junior staff to do this( that is to enter entrants name in a database). It takes one full day to do this manually and with some Google help.

I am so sad that I felt like crying this morning. But I did not. 'Mad Max' does not cry!!

But I will survive and I will work harder for a better tomorrow.

Peace, non! aka Mad Max

Hi all,

There are other contests type and similar contests around the world. And the legalities are unique in each country.

Some of these contests are even on TV.

These contests have ethics and rules.

Just imagine the scandal, if one of these top contests had a pro or semi pro pretending to be an aspiring artist. It would not exist in UK for example.

It would not be tolerated.

It's a sad day.

But if we work even harder and never give up, we will show these CONTEST PROVIDERS.

We will make it with and/or without some other more ethical contests out there.

The law and society has defined the definition of 'CONTEST'. I suggests they look it up. It foremostly has to do what's fair and not fair.

Peace.

BL

I like it Janet.

Musical will one day make a comeback.

So far, every four year Hollywood releases one to two musicals. Better than nothing.

By the way I saw Hairspray (original) 10 times in the cinema. Those were the days.

Best part -- the last song and the celebration scene with the credits rolling.

Cheers!! BL

Janet,

Re: to clear up the confusion

I did not mean it that way.

In the original Hairspray, the ending where the director edits all the best dancing while the credit goes up, that's a great dance compilation. That's what I meant.

Watch the last 10 minutes, it's the best part. Because, at the end, their dance steps stay with you forever.

Some memorable musicals ended on a musical dance number while the credit rolls.

I like muscials where everyone is still dancing while credits are rolling and really I never wanted that musical to end.

And I also like it when a musical starts off right away with big spectacular dance number while the main characters and tone are introduced.

Hopes this clears up the confusion.

Cheers.

BL

Hi Janet,

Just wondering - do you think that "breakdancing" has a space in musicals?

I saw this dancing and it looks that this style refuses to go away. Here is the link -- http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pBwi_NNwTvY&NR=1

Is this the future of musicals?

I could be wrong.

But if Fred Astaire was alive I'm sure he would love breakdancing (only the standing freestyle moves, not the spinning stuffs, you know).

Any thoughts?

Peace,

BL

Quentin Tarantino's WWII drama, Inglorious Bastards is on its way. Finally, he finished writing the screenplay.

In Cannes interview -- JoBlo -- Tarantino said that he finished a draft of the script and the movie will be released in late 2009.

Will you be looking forward to this movie?

Will this movie be huge?

I can't wait to see it!!!!!!!!

I would love to see Brad Pitt or Tom Cruise or Borat or Matt Damon or the new actor from "Wanted", in the lead....

Let's see.

If you had to cast this movie, who would be in that list?

Peace,

BL

PAGE is one of the biggest and best contest.

So placing is a sign that more good news is not far away.

PAGE is a screewriting contest that respect hard work and dedication.

Finally!!!

Peace, happiness and prosperity.

The best is yet to come.

Good luck to all.

BL

Hello,

This is indeed good news.

So how will you guys be celebrating--

Please pick one -

1. drinking with friends 2. drinking with co-workers 3. smoking it up (cigars etc.) 4. all night partying at the local Pub 5. re-writing the next script 6. calling friends and chatting all night on the telephone 7. just doing the Borat dance when no one is watching 8. taking it easy and thinking of the next script 9. walk in the rain 10. dance in the rain 11. give a friend a hug 12. catching Batman (T.D.K) 13. _______________________

Really, I'm so happy for all, right here at Moviebytes! Bravo!!!

Peace Forever.

BL

Hi folks,

Experienced screenwriters often have elaborate crazy writing rituals?

What's yours?

Here's some I heard about --

1. I need candlelight on my desk

2. I need to order a small pizza before I start and then eat it by bites only, every hour

3. I smoke three cigars while writing from six to twelve pm.

4. I drink tons of vodka(with lots of ice) while writing

5. I like to play romantic music in the background (W. Huston!)

6. I bake and write at the same time

7. I write before I go to the dance clubs with my friends

Now what's your writing ritual?



Peace

BL

Hi, anyone used the $50 OFF Scriptapalooza Coverage or the regular coverage or development notes from Scriptapalooza?

How did it go?

Any thoughts?

How were the notes or coverage?

Peace

BL

Thanks Dorothy,

I'm thinking of using them. 80% ready.



Thanks.

Hi Janet,

Some people walked out on Mama Mia...

It was an okay movie.

PB singing, what a diaster.

Did you see it?

Peace, BL

Hi all,

Re: Batman The Dark Knight

Do you have a 3 sentence max. quick review of this film. And if you wanted to be a Film Critic, here is your chance. Remember it has to be 3 sentence max!

And be nice.

Peace, BL

Hey Robert,

You sound like a "King of New Orlean " and The Real Deal....

Someone should write a Bio/novel on all your journeys.

Don't worry, you will make it. Keep plugging at it, don't give up. You already have a big start.

Cheers!

And,

Peace,

BL

Yes,

Readers are so emotional but extremely talented and underpaid.

I tried working for free as an intern Reader to see what was the big fuss!

Conclusion, my brain got fried and my head and shoulders almost fell off.

What is the maximum number of script that can be "coveraged" in one day?

Some guys could read 5 scripts and hand in a 2 page coverage for each script.

What's their secrets?

How many scripts can you read or/and cover in one day?

Peace,

BL

Hi Folks,

Can't wait to use PAGE new services listed on their webpage.

A big THANK YOU goes to Jennifer and Zoe.

This is indeed good news.

Just to show that PAGE will always set the standards with amazing customer services. They are here to truly help screenwriters and they really care about our success. Just take a look at the description of their new services.

PAGE is the most honest and professional screenplay contest and feedback/evaluation in this world.

Here is what they are offering.

JUDGE'S FEEDBACK (3-5 pages) $75

CONCEPT EVALUATION (2-3 pages) $50

IN-DEPTH SCRIPT ANALYSIS (8-10 pages) $125

Peace,

BL

Hi all,

Could some of the quarter-finalists and finalists from past Zoetrope Screenwriting contest post some of their loglines or taglines (with ratings eg. R,PG, AA, on NC17) on this thread

My friends are having great difficulty finding out what kind of scripts are favored at Zoetrope.

I tried to help them but no luck.

Maybe this will help.



Peace.

BL

Congrats to all.

Happy to see that Scriptaplooza is really making an effort to assist "undiscovered" screenwriters. Bravo! I reviewed the list - some new, promising and very talented writers on that LIST.

BL

Hey,

How's the project going?

There's a sudden big demand for projects like these....

Good luck.

Peace BL

Hi Folks...

We become Screenwriting Contest junkies because we have to.

Everyone is addicted to something.

I think the problem is that I will always be addicted to Screenwriting Contests.

For me, I have to apply every month.

And every 2 month, I must check my emails hourly to see if I made the list.

Yes I am a happy Screenwriting Contest Junkie.

I wasted tons of money on Screenwriting contests.

I know screenwriters who place in over 10 contests and had managers/agents, but they still apply to the small and to big Screenwriting contests. They can't stop.

Don't worry, its a safe form of addiction and it improves our script and maybe one day our BANK account.

Are you addicted to Screenwriting Contests?

Peace,

BL

Hey Dorothy,

You're fine. Just have a Screenwriting Contest Addiction Budget (S.C.A.B).

For example don't go over $400.00 per year.

Hope this helps.

Peace.

BL

Hi Folks,

Just read a breathtakingly insightful interview on an agent.

Check it out.. http://theworkingscreenwriter.blogspot.com/2008/08/interview-agent-x.html

Peace,

BL

Hi Frank,

Good for you.

I'm thinking of using Chad's(Script Pimp's) coverage service for $225.00 (not a bad price!)

Where can we read your "consider" script or a sample of your script?

Could you post the COVERAGE REPORT you got from Script Pimp on this forum.

Who was the reader who provided you with this great coverage -- was it Chad himself? Or his full-time staff?

Peace, BL

Hi Poetist Soul,

Hope the depression is something of the past. Sounds like you're working it out. Most writers face this problem, off and on.

Some advice --

-take some time off, have fun -hang around positive people -do something 100% different, for example, I did some volunteering in University, worked with a zoologist, studying birds of prey, it changed my life, made it more exciting and slowly I escaped depression..

Peace,

BL

Good question --

How does EXPO operate? That's what I want to know.

Are they as transparent and meticulously organized as PAGE or BLUECAT or SCRIPTAPALOOZA?

How does their judging procedures work?

Who are the readers? How are they selected?

Who are the judges? How are they selected?

Are their BIO published ?

EXPO get over 5000 entrants. I would think it would be nice if the co-ordinator of this contest would come to this forum and talk to us and answer some questions.

$50 dollars is a lot of money for a needle in the haystack. That's what it feels like everytime I apply to this contest.

Not much is written on the Web about this contest. Please give some interviews so we know who you are and how you operate!!!!

Peace.

BL

Hi Folks,

Just heard about this new free screenplay (synopsis ONLY) contest.

Here is the link -- http://www.filmmakers.com/contests/screenwriting/the_search_for_the_sacred_script_grant_tecyhlon.htm

Let me know your opinion?

Should we apply.

Good luck !!!!!!!!!!!

BL

Hi Folks,

Larry from Reinkworks provides some the best development/coverage notes.

His notes had a major effect on my writing.

Thanks Redinkworks for having an impact on my life/writing.

Peace

BL

Hi folks,

Anyone used Abbot Management for their screenplays?

Here is the link: http://www.abbotmanagement.com/index.php

How were they?

Peace

BL

Thanks Bernice.

Made my day.

I'll give them a try today.

Thanks again for this detailed info.

Peace BL

Hi,

I would like to use his Dave's services.

But I know very little about the type of notes and coverage he provides?

I can't find any samples of his services on his webpage.

Maybe he can post some on this forum.



Peace BL

Hey Paul,

What's the logline for your R-rated comedy. What's the storyline?

Yes I agree, the future will be full of mean-funny R-rated comedies etc.

Producers are making more R-rated comedies because of YouTube, House Parties, out of control University/College culture and our addiction to the internet.

The more we are addicted the internet, the more "shock-crazy-profane" movies we will need.

Cold turkey anyone?

Are you addicted to the internet?

Addiction to the internet is an epidemic and that is why the future of cinema will be full of:

1. R-RATED and NC 17 COMEDIES 2. R-RATED and NC 17 ACTION MOVIES 3. R-RATED GRAPHIC NOVEL ADAPTATION 4. PG and AA -RATED HORROR/FAMILY ANIMATION 5. AA- ANIME 6. AND THE FIRST R-RATED BATMAN!

And Kevin Smith forever. Can't wait to see his new NC 17 movie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kevin Smith is the future of R-rated and NC 17 comedies!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Peace,

BL

Hello,

Quick question..........

Are you planning to see the new Kevin Smith movie? and why?

I wish Kevin Smith a great box office weekend bonanza.

Peace

BL

Hi Jean,

By any means necessary- ask you manager/agent/network - to send this script to Spike Lee.

This logline is "solid gold".

Peace,

BL

Every year, there is an increase in the number of new aspiring and professional screenwriters entering Screenwriting Contests , WHY?

Why does this number keep going up?

If there was no SCREENWRITING CONTESTS and/or if they were banned -- -- how would you market your screenplays? What would you do?

I know what I would do -- -- enter more PITCH FESTIVALS and master the art of pitching LIVE and finding a good manager.

Peace,

BL

Hey Kenny

Is this part of one of the name of your script?

I like you marketing but not sure...

LOL LOL LOL

LOL

Yes I am too old, soon.

As we get old we loose our passion and loose our eyes, teeth and bone density... LOL

Soon, we have to apply to OLD AGE RETIREMENT homes and become a Zombie.

All this will one day be over. Don't fool yourself thinking you will be the next JAMES DEAN or SEAN PENN or MARIO PUZO or GEORGE LUCAS or ELIZABETH TAYLOR or Millionaire MARK from Scriptapalooza... lol

All iconic scripts and movies were created between 18 and 30 years old.

We are fortune of fools.

We should respect old age and death AND not fight it by going loud into the night.

Go ahead write 10 screenplays. Only one or zero will be any good.

When I'm 70 years old I will give up and escape this reality and move to South Africa like Arthur C. Clark. But I will not make it to see 70 years old.

LOL

Peace,

BL

Patrick,

This is one of your best post.

Thank you for opening the hornet's nest.

If a contest gets 3000 entries(at $40.00 per entries). It takes a good afternoon to read the first 1-3 pages of all these scripts and eliminate 70% of the scripts.

Hard working aspiring screenwriters paid 40 dollars to get eliminated in 10 seconds or less.

I rest my case.

What did Script Pimp and Scriptapalloza and AAA and Expo4 do with all the money they made from rejecting a script in 10 seconds by reading only the first page, for example.

I think the owner of Script Pimp and Scriptapalooza and AAA and Expo4 sat down and actually did that. They made 40.00 dollars in ten seconds from unsuspected upcoming writers. Only the decent scripts went to paid readers.

"Bluecat" is still one the best contest out there.

APPLY TO BLUECAT ONLY.

AFTER YOU GET A GOOD FEEDBACK FROM BLUECAT, THEN ENTER "PAGE", "AUSTIN" AND "NICHOLL" ONLY.

Peace,

BL

Here you go.

Some places are encouraging.

99% of the screenwriting contests in UK are free.

The deadline is Sept 30 2008

http://www.redplanetpictures.co.uk/news/

Peace,

BL

Hi Folks,

His screenwriting blog will always remain cutting edge and set the standards for others to follow.

Mr. www.unknownscreenwriter.com, you are the best of the best. Keep up the exceptional and revolutionary work and advice.

Actually, his blog is better than some movies out there.

Check it out his recent brilliant article for yourself :

http://www.unknownscreenwriter.com/i-am-a-whatever/screenwriting/characters/2008/08/19/

Peace,

BL

Thanks Bobbette,

Will apply soon.

Peace.

BL

Hey STEVEN CALDERWOOD,

Welcome back.

MIA....for a while.

What's your opinion of the new movie coming out ---- "WATCHMEN"....

Did you read any of three scripts making the rounds.....

Will it rock at the box office?





Peace,

BL

Hi Folks,

Who are some of the affordable entertainment lawyers in Los Angeles area?

Looking for one.

Anyone, just graduated from Law School?

I know some charge $350.00 - $450.00 per hour. Too expensive!

Anyone charging around $100.00 per hour. Which is a fair rate.

Peace,

BL

Mr. Kenny,

My name is Kizashozer, (lol) I am the C.E.O. of MoviesUSAGreenlightingProduction "r" us.

I find your email not offensive and funny.

I have a mission for you.

What is a "bluecat", does this animal exist?

Is it legal to paint or dye a cat blue.

I know they have "bluedogs" in Italy.

Shane Black wrote the script for LEATHAL WEAPON 5.

This movie will be made.

Can't wait for this one.

And I heard WILL SMITH will play the villian as previously planned. LOL. Is this suppose to be a joke. Will Smith?

Good God!!!!!!!!!!

Peace, BL

Hey Thomas,

I talked to so many non-Hollywood folks, they don't know what to with this Will Smith actor....his movies, his persona, his DVDs collecting dust in the attic? His not a natural action hero, just my opinion. I'm sure he doesn't like me or my writing. LOL

Hey Eric,

I'll take a look at his course. Is this course on DVD?

Yes, stick to your guns. High concepts is very popular with most studio readers. With all the INDY LABS/STATELITES production house closing down, we have to embrace a new reality...

1. WRITE HIGH CONCEPT SCREENPLAYS

2. ADAPT BEST SELLING NOVELS

3. ADAPT BEST SELLING GRAPHIC NOVELS

4. ADAPT BEST SELLING COMIC BOOKS

5. WRITE BIO SCRIPTS, eg. HEATH LEDGER, DR. DRE, QUINCY JONES, MADONNA, WHITNEY HOUSTON, AMY WINEHOUSE, BERNIE MAC, ELTON JOHN, QUEEN(FREDDY MERCURY), GEORGE BUSH("W"), BILL CLINTON, OBAMA, MICHELE OBAMA, ROSIE, ELLEN, M. MONROE, GARBO ETC.

Peace, BL

Hi Rachael,

Wait for three months (3, max). Just in case they like your letter.

Cheers, BL

As per our Democratic Trends --

SCREENWRITERS : It's not how hard you get hit by a coverage, it's how fast you get up and indirectly look your coverage provider in the eye and tell him/her -->> I'm going to be okay and I'm going to make it and I am unbreakable, so take your best shot.

Screenwriters of America --> living the American Dream, forever.

Peace,



BL

LOL , HEART ATTACK FUNNY! Marty Feldman, what a riot!

Eric, this is a brilliant piece of visual tease for a Doc special on screenwriting.

LOL LOL

LOL LLO 0LL LOL L O . L 00000000000000000000000000

Sorry!

I meant Kenny, not Eric.

Laughing so hard, that I forgot to type correctly...

Good one Kenny, Marty Feldman, I Googled him, funny pictures. The good days. Memories. LOL

Hey Thomas,

For example, some "Western(Cowboy) movies are very one dimensional but slowly gained iconic status.

Same with High Concept action movies ---> they have the potential to become iconic or cult movies.

For example Under Siege (1992)directed by Andrew Davis with Steven Seagal, Tommy Lee Jones, Gary Busey is a brilliant one-dimensional high concept movie enjoyed by past and current and future movie goers.

Peace,

BL

Hey,

From my experience, all film festivals lean towards ONE kind of cinematic style or theme.

Review their films/script from past years. Email past winners.

Never heard of this Film Festival.

Peace,

BL

Hi Folks,

A friend just emailed me the quarter finalist. He's excited about winning after striking out twice with Jim and Portia. But Jim and Portia told him re-apply. I told him not to give up and yes apply again AND AGAIN and keep using their coverage services over and over at Coverage Ink. They are like writer's boot camp. Hard knocks of screenwriting.

Here is the the quarter finalist list: Congrats to all and yes their coverage works, but you get the benefits if you use them twice with the same reader or different reader.

Heather Upton, Belfast Boys CA Bennett, Death Valley Dig Kelly Murry, La Matadora A.C. Yacobian, Rasta Pasta Aaron Marshall, The Last Adventure of Martin Finch Alan Sproles, Lizanne Southgate, Eden Lost Rich Sheehy, Sliding into Home Paul Sargia, The Man Who Could Stop Time Steven Zawacki, Orcadia Suzanne Darling, Brush With Fame Dennis Bailey, Pound for Pound Chris Jopling, Blacklights Andrew Zeoli & Christian Wagner, Blueballers Attila Nagy, Gilbert Inboden, Garen Inboden, Enlighten Up Russ Meyer, Organic Svengali Vito LaBruno, Last American Guido Adam Nur, Jetpack Nisso Cohen, The Source Mark Eaten & Stacy Dymalski, Center of Fortitude Art Blum, Back from the Dead Patrick Nicholas, Edgewater Michael Coleman Jr., Clone Dan Williams, Forest Fire! Lisa Cordova, Remote Stryker Alexander Valhouli, Louis CV Herst, The Bardo Realm Marnie Collins, Silver River Jerry White, Link Sam Neil Kesler, Fatal Ambition Jason Kent, Colossus Jarran Davis, Newton's Cradle Krista Zumbrink, Virgin Marie James Schannep, A Poem for Silvertown Odin Shafer, Bury Me in Fire David Larson, Laced Up Gary Eichelberger, Catch 21 Susan and Wayne Boyer, Poser Mark Nui, Shanghai Blood Alasdair McMullan, The Blues Detective Jim Corona, DEAD Line Cynthia Troyer, Between

Hi Lou,

Should I get the coverage from Jim and Portia after or before the contest early bird deadline?

They said that all entrants get free feeback like Bluecat and they could re-submit before the final deadline.

So there's twice the chance of winning.

It's a good system, and gives people a better chance in this already crazy race and getting "deadlier" every year.

Thanks Jim and Portia.

Peace, BL

Hi Folks,

Producers and Coverage Gurus did not like this movie (TROPIC THUNDER) 10 years ago. They said it was politically incorrect and offensive.

But now this script/movie is sky rocketing to the bank - Box Office: $65,839,915!!!! so far!!!!!!!!!

Why is this movie doing so well?

Will "Scriptapalooza" or "Script Pimp" or "AAA" and "EXPO5" and "Final Draft", "Story Pros", ever support/pick a script like this as a finalist or winner?

How come Screenplay Contests are not taking any risks like Ben Stiller? Read the script at www.simplyscript.com for yourself, it's brilliant. It breaks all the rules.

Is R-rated "shock humor" the future of cinema? Ben Stiller says -- -- YES.

Should screenwriters write more shocking and cerebral raunchy scripts?

Overall, is it fair to say that most Screenplay Contest providers would not know what to do with TROPIC THUNDER...

It's not there fault.

Welcome to Hollywood!!!! The other side.

Listen to your heart and push your vision and stick to your guns. Ben Stiller is your role model. He's the man!

Keep Marketing and Keep Writing and Keep Shoving It Down There Throat!!!!!

Peace,

BL

Hi Janet,

Just saw the 'CHICAGO" book (includes the screenplay).

It cost, I think,---- $40.00---- was in a rush. I think it gets discounted during the Christmas season.

I might buy it.

Do you have it? How's the script?

Peace, BL

Hey Comrades,

FilmMakers Int'l Screenplay Awards 2008 should come out soon. When will the first round be announced?

Did you get your email yet.

Peace, BL

Hi Frendos,

Where is Hollywood getting its money?

I'm sure it's not from USA.

Maybe from Europe, China, Middle East, Africa, India, Canada, Alaska (ok that last one is an extraneous guess)?

Can someone tell me who's pumping these millions into Hollywood?

Are you saying that the BIG studios can get a Line Of Credit(LOC) for 500 million with the snap of a finger from US BANKS ?

I think the big money is coming from Europe and maybe Russia.

What's you guess?

Peace,

BL

Hey,

Congrats to Nathan Goldman for making it in the Quarter Finals at Filmmakers.com

Great title and very very enticing logline!

Hey Mr. Patrick Daly, congrats to you for making QF at www.filmmakers.com

They have some fantastic interviews. Great for networking.

www.filmmakers.com are unique and very professional and very business-like.

That's why they are called FILMMAKERS.COM!

Peace,

BL

Is JAWS a great script?

Are there any script books (or chapters) out there that tried to analyze the structure inside out?

Maybe Linda Seger tried it?

I could be wrong.



Peace,

BL

Hi,

I'm thinking of becoming a studio reader!

What is the highest flat-rate a reader should get with zero work experience? I need a fair number!

And what should the lowest? Please be humane!

This is based on the fact that I worked for free at a local small upcoming production company for one year.

Peace,

BL

Hi folks,

Are there any screenwriters writing R-rated historical drama/romance out there?

Have you seen any good R-rated historical films?

For example, if a screenwriter wrote a R-rated version of Cleopatra or The Mummy or Samson and Delilah or Elizabeth

....would it do well at the box office?



Peace,

BL

Thanks Terry,

I'll take a look at some of those films one day.

How I miss movies like Dangerous Liason.

How's Rochester doing?

Best Regards,

Hi Folks,

Did you see KILL BILL in "blue ray"?

I know one guy who buys around 10 "blue ray" DVD per month and he only works as a waiter in Manhattan? That's 600 dollars per month!!!!!

Maybe watching TITANIC in "blue ray" is better than watching it on screen?

Do you swear by 'blue ray"?

Peace,



BL BL

Hey,

The new 'BLACK LIST' is out there.

Have you seen it?

Read 3 scripts from an old 'black list'.

Those scripts broke all the rules??????

I don't get it, these scripts were full of descriptions and some prose?

How come they are so different from scripts found at WOTS, SCRIPTAPALOOZA, SCRIPT PIMP, AUSTIN etc.

I'm just saying that I AM seeing two different flock of birds.

One batch does well at contests and another batch gets placed on the "BLACK LIST"

Please, please advise

Peace,

Bl

Thanks Ron,

You got a point there.

When done right, descriptions (more than 4 sentences) can push a story forward. Makes for a good weekend read.

Peace,



BL

Attn : Screenwriters

Do not type or text your scrits or ANY FORM OF texting while driving. I used to do this. I stopped this bad habit.

As per this terrible accident reported by CNN.

MORAL OF STORY....DO NOT TYPE WHILE DRIVING ETC.

"Probe confirms train engineer's texting on the jobStory Highlights Investigators looking into whether engineer was texting at time of fatal collision

Phone records show he sent text messages during work hours on day of crash

Engineer Robert Sanchez was among 25 people killed in Friday's crash

Investigators have determined the brakes on train he was driving were not applied

LOS ANGELES, California (CNN) -- The Metrolink train engineer involved in last week's fatal collision near Los Angeles sent text messages from his cell phone while on the job, investigators said, although it was unclear whether he was doing so at the time of the crash.

Investigators do a test to find when the engineers of the two trains were able to see each other before the crash. 2 of 2 The National Transportation Safety Board is looking into claims that the engineer, 46-year-old Robert Sanchez, was sending text messages to two teenagers on Friday when his commuter train slammed into a Union Pacific freight train in Chatsworth, killing two dozen people, including himself.

Investigators subpoenaed the phone records of the engineer and determined that he "had sent and received text messages on the day of the accident, including some while he was on duty," according to an NTSB statement Wednesday.

Investigators were still trying to determine at what time the messages were sent.

The NTSB already had determined that the brakes on the Metrolink train were not applied before the collision and that stop signals at the scene were working properly, said Kitty Higgins, an NTSB member assigned to the probe. Metrolink has said its train, carrying about 220 passengers, failed to stop for a red signal. Watch as callers to 911 describe the crash »

Twenty-four bodies were found at the scene after the head-on collision during rush hour Friday in the northwest Los Angeles suburb. A 25th victim, a man in his 50s, died later at a hospital. More than 130 people were injured."

Hey folks,

You read this very popular book :: "YOUR SCREENPLAY SUCKS" by William Akers.

Please hand in your mini review if possible.

Should I buy it?

Thanks in advance for your help and

Peace,

BL

Hi Pasha,

So far, how many have applied?

Who are applying?

Are you focusing more on the INDY crowd and less on HIGH CONCEPT scripts?

An estimate is fine.

Regards,

BL

Hi Folks,

Why are most horror screenplays written by mostly guys?

I would love to read a double R-RATED or a double NC 17 horror screenplay written by a woman or a husband and wife team.

Do they exist?

Are screenplay contests full of some woman horror writers?

Year 2009 needs the next Mary Shelly!!!!!!!!! or even Bronte!!!!!



Peace

BL

Hi Folks,

This company(Abbot Management) is making waves...

Everyone is talking about them. They're huge on the web.

They will become the next big thing since INKTIP.

I admire their business vision, hard work and acute management skills....

Peace, BL

Hey Folks,

Okay, I'm happy that Bluecat is a first rate contest and I will always use them....BUT

I wished that Gordy would ask questions that would get into the mind of his award winning screenwriter, just announced. "The Piano Tuner" by Timo E. Peltonen is a decent script, don't get me wrong.

Next time Mr. Gordy, please, PLEASE ask the winner tons of questions about pitching strategies, marketing tactics, writers block, stress, multi-tasking and the art and business of screenwriting and not to mention the pain of winning an award and still not getting an agent or manager or producer to bite.

Ask questions about the anguish, frustrations and selfish lifestyle of good writing. All writers and screenwriters making more than $30,000 per year, go through hell to live that lifestyle.

Writers who win contests have tons of stress. Please, PLEASE, don't paint a rosy picture.

Sorry Mr. Gordy, I was a bit disappointed with your questions. I learned nothing from them.

Sorry.



Peace, BL

A key company made me this offer ----> 5 readers, 1 script for around $500.00 dollars for 5 coverage.

Is this a wise choice?

PROS and CONS?

Would like to get some advice on this strategy.

Sounds like a sweat shop, but I could be wrong.

PEACE, BL

Is this being outsourced to India or Europe? Coverage Packs, too good to be true.

But India is full of polific and award winning novelists and screenwriters and experts in Literature. Again, I could be wrong.

Please advise.



Peace, BL

Hey Patrick,

Script Shark has the Coverage Packs. 5 coverage for 500.00 dollars with five different readers for one script.

Just curious to know how is this possible and what's the advantage of a Coverage Pack???? Are they all "senior" readers?????

India is booming. It's possible that the readers are from India.

But my gut feeling tells me that this might not be true. I could be right.

Peace, BL

Hey Bernice,

Contest owners/co-coordinators should take themselves out of their comfort zone. They are so conservative with their interviewing and management skills.

Give us something we haven't seen or heard.

Some of the greatest writers and screenwriters and true artists and they reveal their dark secrets and techniques while they have fun teasing us by making us think. Yes, THINK.

Hollywood is exciting.

Entertain, inspire and educate and shock us.

Don't bore us.

Peace BL

Hi, folks,

PAGE is the best when telling you what's good and bad about your script.

The most professional readers in this business.

I plan to use then forever.

Their development notes are so "crispy" and very very pro and very very helpful.

They have changed my life and my writing.

Bravo.

Peace, BL

The Low Dweller, hypnotic and a first rate thriller. A stunning accomplishment!!!!!!!!

Written by an aspiring screenwriter, his first big sale actually. Sold for mid six digit. YES, a first-time writer, Brad Ingelsby, who works as an insurance salesman in Pennsylvania!!!!!!!!!!!

Did you read it? Did you like it?

Now my question?

Yes, this script is amazing. It's full of prose. It's full of slick descriptions. It did well at Nicholl. It's 100% atmospheric.

And I will say it again, it's masterfully written.

Okay now the question?

In the past, why were script GURUS telling me not to use prose in my scripts and don't show off with your visual flair/descriptions?

Read the first 5 pages of this amazing script, its hypnotic and vivid and so visually crisp that that could see the movie on the page.

Peace, BL

Hi,

Just the paper version. Will try to email soon in pdf.

Cheers.

Hey Paul,

Do you write dark thrillers?

Tons of upcoming directors are hooked on thrillers (that is the screenplay).

It's a big market and 2009 is already taken up by all sorts of thrillers.

No Country... -- great movie and script.

Peace.