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Someone, Somewhere, Is Listening

Two police detectives, estranged lovers of years past, risk life and career in an undercover attempt to identify the sociopath conducting a campaign of extortion, robbery, rape, and murder based on information gleaned from personal phone conversations.

A sociopath preys upon the city, weaving a web of rape, robbery, blackmail, and murder. His nemesis is in the form of two police detectives, Karl Rider and Edith Harris, two estranged lovers of years past now thrust together on special assignment to discover a link among a series of similar but unrelated crimes. Edith's procedural methods immediately clash with Karl's independent and intuitive style of operation, his suspicion being the special assignment is to determine, then cover up a possible police connection associated with the crimes.

The brunt of the investigation falls upon Edith as Karl, against orders, maintains his connections with Robbery/Homicide in an investigation of drug-related robberies that have escalated to murder. When a snitch of Karl's is murdered, he goes rogue, setting the perpetrator up for assassination. Edith is aghast upon discovering his actions.

Old Flames are rekindled as Karl and Edith work together. Edith's current lover, Kevin, is aware of the previous relationship between Karl and Edith and offers Edith marriage at the expense of her career.

Karl feels there is a connection between the drug/murder cases and those under special assignment. A link is determined to monitored phone conversations; an untraceable, undetectable means of surveillance. A police sting is conducted but goes sour due to the intervention of an adversary of Karl's who works on the police force. This confirms Karl's suspicion of police involvement.

The antagonist witnesses the botched sting. Enraged, he tracks down and murders a beautiful young intern who assisted Karl and Edith with the operation.

Karl and Edith become of one mind, launching a second sting independent of department knowledge. With the aid of a high-tech former military intelligence officer, they place their lives and careers on the line, in what becomes a Die Hard duel to the death.

Script Excerpt
Written by:
Format:
TV Movie
Genres:
Budget:
Mid
Starring Roles For:
Jon Hamm
40-Year Old Man
A young Sigourney Weaver
In the Vein Of:
inspired by true events

Posted:
05/27/2016
Updated:
01/29/2024
Author Bio:
I’ve had representation in the past, but am currently without representation. Not a WGA member. I was optioned once by a major television producer.

Contest Results:
Filmmakers/TV (Finalist, Sixth Place: Category Other) [2016]
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