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Message Date Posted: 11/18/2017 9:06 PM (2 of 2)

John Krueger View This Topic Jame's Cameron Titanic Release Dec 2017-GREATEST LOVE STORY EVER

I still reckon there was enough room on that floating door for Leo's character to get saved. Maybe Kate's character just wanted a clean break from her whirlwind romance. Favorite scene was where Leo held onto Kate at the bow of the ship and she thought she was flying. "I'm flying. I'm flying." And as much as I am not a fan of Celine Dion - she did a great job on the Theme song.


Message Date Posted: 11/02/2017 3:42 AM (1 of 2)

John Krueger View This Topic MY SCRIPT ADVICE TO YOU

Hi
I've read a few scripts in my time and I don't claim to be a seasoned writer but I've read this first page a few times and I was really unimpressed. Maybe I'm too dumb to get why this first page is so great but I thought it was quite average. It used a narrator and starts off with the hero lying in bed remembering a book he saw at a party but I am wondering what makes this first page special.
Just checking if maybe you've posted the wrong link or if not, could you maybe pinpoint what makes this first so brilliant cause I just can't see it. Sorry.