2025 PAGE International Screenwriting Awards
GREAT Exposure for Contest Winners & Finalists!
Back

On Board

A "ship of fools" indeed: madcap teenagers, a lush head of security, a priest who loves riddles, a captain off death-row, a martial artist challenging a boxer — and a serial killer. Come on board for the cruise of a lifetime.

Script Excerpt
Written by:
Format:
Screenplay
Budget:
Modest
Posted:
04/14/2019
Updated:
01/06/2025
Author Bio:
(Last updated: 7 January 2025 ).

LATEST NEWS. Today (7 January 2025), I have completed a thorough revision of On Board.  Wow, some 50 outright errors have been spotted and corrected. Many stilted action / descriptive paragraphs have been rewritten. Dialogue has been fine-tuned. The result: reading On Board will be smoother as there will be less jarring due to encountering errors, stilted / ambiguous action paragraphs and bloated / unflowing dialogue.

Show More

Go Pro!