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SETTLING THE BOOKS

Lured by the reading of a billionaire rare book dealer’s will, an investigator and four other heirs are sealed in an airtight panic room, and with only four hours air, must solve the centuries-old mystery contained in the book ‘The Castilian Cypher’ in order to escape.

Five heirs arrive in the reading room of a remote mansion for the reading of the will of billionaire rare book seller DALTON TARLAIN (late 40s but looks 60). Velvet covered chairs surround a massive oak table. Rich wood paneling covers the walls. The room is lit by gas wall sconces producing a whitish-blue flame. No windows. A large pillar is in the corner, looks out of place.

Impatient lawyer JADE CAMDEN (late 20s) fills in for her father who wrote the will. Jade reads off her father’s laptop. The heirs: unshakable private investigator SHANK FIELDS (40s), a hefty, less than couth newspaper tycoon #CORNELIUS PRESCOTT (late 40s), a middle-aged, multi-lingual, know-it-all rare book authenticator LUCINDA BRETMORE, the butler who wears a tie-dye t-shirt ANTON HALL (19), and Jade, all receive a preliminary gift, each one more bizarre.

Jade reads on: “Jade Camden having fulfilled her duties, is to receive --” Jade pages to the next computer screen. “-- receive a rest.” “I will take over now” booms the voice of the unseen Dalton over the intercom. The computer goes black. “This is not some hokey tape after death. I’m very much alive.” Several stand to flee. “Sit down!!” They comply. “You came here greedily after my books. Well, you will not be disappointed. I have ‘thee’ book. I’ve found The Castillian Cypher!”

Bam! The pillar slides into the ceiling, revealing a book display stand on a thin floor pedestal holding an ancient book. “The only copy, and it goes… to the last one living.” Some gasp. Several rush for the door. Bam! A steel sleeve slams down, seals the door. Their eyes dart around like the trapped rats that they are.

“People, pay attention. You’ve a limited amount of oxygen and time to figure a way out of the room. I will only tell you once.” Dalton wheezes, then speaks rapidly. “The book is the key. Both from day one and today, it contains the answer. You need only decipher the Cypher. Don’t let the fact that never has it been done in a thousand years discourage you. After all, you are motivated.” Dalton laughs, bringing on another coughing fit. Dalton’s mike goes quiet.

The heirs scramble to find a weak spot in the wall. Try their cell phones. No service. Try the computer. No electricity. Try slamming shoulders into the sealed door. No use. Dalton laughs, reveals what perceived great wrong each one has done him. Then silence from Dalton. The heirs work together. Can any survive long enough to solve the Cypher, and gain their release before they run out of light, air, and time?

If that wasn’t enough of a ticking clock, the bookseller’s voice returns at intervals to extract a confession from an heir before causing that heir’s death.

The twist: Shank was hired years before to track down MEGAN, a woman the billionaire Dalton wanted. Shank has hid her for years in plain sight. So much in plain sight that Megan is impersonating an heir, and so Shank must also keep her identity secret as he attempts to free everyone from the room.

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Format:
Screenplay
Genres:
Budget:
Micro
In the Vein Of:
Ten Little Indians
Panic Room
Buried
Posted:
04/16/2013
Updated:
04/14/2024
Author Bio:
Nominated for the Arthur Rosenfeld Award For Excellence In Dramatic Writing.

The holiday comedy short that I wrote, ALL CHOKED UP, premiered in Minneapolis, MN.

My comedic cautionary tale short script, JUST A TIC, was both nominated for Best Lead Actor in a short film, and won a Script To Screen Award at the Barebones Film Festival. Won 4th place Micro Comedy at The Indie Gathering. Runner Up for Best Comedy Scene at The Action On Film Film Festival.

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Contest Results:
Bare Bones (First Place) [2013]
Stage 32 Microbudget Horror (Semifinalist) [2020]
Your Script Produced! (Quarterfinalist) [2021]
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